Maidenfall

As published  on Wattpad, December 24, 2017.

Who’s the girl, then?  Come now…It must be someone here in Eskivik sent you trekking all the way up that mountain to Maidenfall. The lovely Vigdis, maybe?  Or dark-haired Ragnhild?  You’ve fancied her ever since I can remember. Ah, the peddler’s daughter, is it? Esja’s her name, right?  Aye, a pretty one, that.  I can see how she stole your heart.  By the look of you, I’m guessing you feel your tribute to Itaia was successful then? You’ll find out soon enough, I’m sure—she usually comes ‘round to the tavern this time of day with her wares.

Tell me, Aegir, did your ma or fa ever tell you why the people of Eskivik have always gone to the mountain when love seemed out of reach?  Or how those peaks came to be known as Maidenfall in the first place?  I’ll tell you what—while you wait for your lady love to pop ‘round, I’ll fill you in on the story and you finish that flagon of mead.  What do you say?

The story, as told to me by my own fa, goes like so.  The shrine to Itaia is a relatively new addition, just a few centuries old.  Before that, the place was sacred to none save those wildling spirits of stone and tree that still call it home. But there came a day when all that changed as Graethas, God of Lust, looked down upon the world of mortals bored out of his wits and seeking distraction.  Always possessed of a wandering eye, his current lover, the mortal Alfhild of Hravnklif, had lost her appeal for him and, though he could hear her sobbing pleas for attention as they echoed through the planes, he had little desire to return to her.  Alfhild was too familiar—he wanted something new, something different.  It was only by chance that a gleaming stone of giant’s size caught his gaze as it perched high atop the mountains. Polished by rain and sculpted by wind, it was so reminiscent of a woman’s form that the wanton god found himself smirking as he thought of what he could do with such a voluptuous partner, were she not made entirely of lifeless rock.

Now, many a man, myself included, might smile and chuckle at the suggestive shape of the rock before moving on to find a willing friend of flesh and blood…but not Graethas.  Instead of moving on to a living lover, an idea took root within his mind.  Using the magical tools with which the goddess Lilne sculpted the gnomes and goblins, Graethas set to work perfecting the stone’s form, tailoring every curve and line to his liking.

But the stone maiden did not live.

Stealthy as a serpent, Graethas crept into the marble-columned halls of his grandmother Dionea, who bestows the breath of life on mortals, and stole from her mouth a single breath as she slept.  Next, he pilfered a spark from the brazier of his grandfather Nenzir, who gifts to mortals an active mind.  These he then placed within the heart and head of the stone maiden.

Yet still she did not live.

For a long time, Graethas sulked. Why, he was a god, after all!  What he wills should come to be, should it not?  How dare this lump of stone refuse to come to life as he commanded it? Angry and sullen, he wandered the gods’ home of Elethine and many other worlds, lamenting his failure and hurt pride while ignoring all else.  Like a spoiled child, he continued this way until the day he stumbled across his cousin Sitri as she brought into being a new flower.  At first, he regarded her with bitterness and no small amount of jealousy as she wove the seed into being but, as he watched, he noticed something peculiar and his rancor turned to joy. As she held the sleeping seed in the palm of her hand, Sitri blew upon it, thereby gifting it some of her own divine essence.  The seed immediately leapt to life and sprouted. As Sitri gently placed it on the ground, its new roots dug eagerly into the soil.

This was the key Graethas had overlooked.  You see, my boy, he had always been a selfish god.  He never cared to know the ins and outs of creation so therefore he had no idea that, at birth, the gods give to all living things a trinity of gifts.  He had given the stone maiden the first two, breath and consciousness, but it was the most precious one of all that he had missed, the one without which you and I would be naught more than a lump of dead flesh: the divine spark, that which awakens and propels life forward.

Returning to the maiden, he stood before her and kissed her passionately, willing some of his own essence into her form. Within moments, he felt her stir. Her body rose to his kiss and her flesh warmed to his touch.  When their lips parted, the stone maiden smiled and looked demurely away.

From the moment she awoke, Graethas was enamored of her beauty and named her Kanai, meaning “comely one” in the ancient tongue.  And a sight to see she was indeed! Her honey-brown skin sparkled in the sunlight; her hair fell about her shoulders in ebony waves.  Beautiful and kind, gracious and graceful, the testament of Kanai’s divine origins was proclaimed through her every movement.  And for a time, it seemed as though Kanai had calmed Graethas’ roving spirit as he whiled away countless hours in the giantess’ arms, losing himself within the sparkling depths of her dark eyes. He had found his new plaything, pleased that she was there as he desired her to be and his boredom was at last appeased by her willing flesh.

Kanai, for her part, truly loved Graethas and her love grew with each encounter. She adored him wholly and, in her innocence, believed the sweet words he whispered as they lay entwined. As he had often told her was the case, she lived for him and each time he took his leave, she sat forlorn and lonely until his return.

Now that’s not to say that he neglected her.  Quite the contrary, actually!  He showered her with gifts, with mead and meat and exotic fruits.  But Lust, my friend, hides a fickle heart and it was only a matter of time before Graethas once again grew bored and unhappy with Kanai.  Unlike his other lovers, mortals the lot of them, Kanai required tending to, which was not something he had anticipated. Kanai may have looked like a grown woman but was really a new born creation.  Like a young child, she looked to Graethas to be her teacher. Sheltered on the mountain top, she knew nothing of the world around her, aware only of her home and her love. Graethas, on the other hand, had no desire to teach her about the rest of Creation or her place in it—all of which he considered to be subjects of too little consequence for a god—and shrugged off any questions she posed with a kiss.

This tactic served to distract her for a time but, as children are wont to do, Kanai eventually started to challenge him in this regard, turning her head when he tried to kiss her.  She begged him to show her the world and tell her of the things in it. When she showed no sign of giving up her desire for knowledge, Graethas decided that it was time to move on.  None of his other lovers had made such demands of him. He had wanted a lover, not a student or a child. And so he once more cast his eye about in search of something new, spending less and less time with Kanai until he finally stopped visiting her all together. Having found entertainment in the bed of another, Graethas forgot the stone maiden to whom he had once promised eternity.

Alone, Kanai wept.  And as she wept, the divine essence Graethas had bestowed upon her began to slip away.  Why? Because, boy, a creator must tend to his creation like a parent. Like Sitri cares for nature, Graethas should have cared for Kanai, teaching and guiding her so she could one day provide for herself.  He should have nurtured the divine spark within her, which would have allowed her to become a new living being in her own right.  But because Graethas did not nurture it, the divine spark he gave her never truly became her own. So, it slipped away with her grief, carried to the foot the mountain by her teardrops, which pooled and formed the lake we call Líf’kelda, the “life well.”

Revenge?  No, that thought never crossed her mind.  Too kind and sweet, she was. Too like a lost child. Instead, heartbroken and weakened, Kanai welcomed the end she knew was drawing near.  Months and years passed as she lay down upon the mountain while the last of her essence trickled away.  It was in the early spring that the world around her began to fade away forever as her breath and consciousness fell back to sleep and she returned to stone. The crisp scent of wet earth and pine clung to the air.  Just before the final breath seeped from her lungs, Kanai became aware of a sound near her feet.

It was a shepherd from our very village, his footsteps crunching on the melting snow as he called to Itaia, lamenting the unrequited love he felt for a young maiden.  His sheep nibbled on fresh green shoots, looking curiously at their master as he spoke aloud his prayer to the goddess.  On hearing this, Kanai’s broken heart gave one final beat and with her last breath, she called to him, bestowing upon him a blessing so that he could obtain the love that she never would.  And the shepherd?  Attributing the blessing to the goddess he’d begged for favor, he returned to the village and married his love.

Not long after, Itaia herself sent a priest to Eskivik who told of the sacrifice made by Kanai and called for a shrine to be built at her feet.  People have been going there to ask Itaia’s assistance in love ever since.  The mountains themselves soon became known as the Place of the Maiden’s Fall, or Maidenfall as we say now.

Why did Itaia send the priest?  Well, it is said that that final outpouring of essence on behalf of the shepherd made Itaia take pity on the maiden and claim the site as sacred to herself.  But perhaps she knew of her son’s actions all along and wanted to atone for his mistreatment of poor Kanai.  Or perhaps her heart, moved by the many lovelorn pleas uttered there, urged her to take heed…

But I suppose only the gods know why they do what they do. All that matters is, for centuries, many a man and woman have uttered a prayer to the holy Lady at that spot, just as you done, and it worked out all right for them.  Besides, don’t look now but you’re about to find out just how well it works first hand. Esja’s just walked in the door, smiling wider than the Askfjord and heading straight for you.